The Not-So-Clever Fox
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Mr. Fox was thought he was a very clever guy. He liked to scale buildings and sneak into new places without permission… until one day he broke into the theater.
It was a chilly day in the beginning of spring and Mr. Fox
had just come out of his burrow for the season.
He decided he wanted to go exploring and maybe stir up some trouble like
he did when he was younger. He wandered
around the forest for hours trying to find a good place to be mischievous, and he finally found a small village.
The farthest building on the outskirts of the village was a
theater, and Mr. Fox decided that was where he wanted to cause trouble. He quickly found the dressing room and
noticed that it was devoid of costumes, but every wall was filled with
masks. He started trying them on one by
one and acting silly; making fun of each type of animal that he tried on. He started small; making fun of mice, bugs,
and snakes with the masks. When he put
on one mask, a brave little mouse jumped out of the corner and said “hey! You
had better watch what you say about others, because one day you might step on
the wrong toes!!” And Mr. Fox thought “How would this little mouse ever think
that he could threaten me?”. So he
continued… without taking into account the advice of the brave little
mouse.
As he went down the wall the animal masks got bigger and
bigger… bunnies, opossums, raccoons, wolves, bobcats, and even bears! Mr. Fox was having a grand time making fun of
other people, and he wasn't being nice about it at all. Many of the small animals heard of his
actions or saw him and were reduced to tears, for they were not as brave as the
little mouse.
Finally, Mr. Fox had had enough of his laughter and he
decided that he was hungry and it was time to go home. He walked outside, and the sun was beginning
to set. “Oh no” thought Mr. Fox, “I had
better hurry to get home for dinner!”.
Unfortunately for Mr. Fox, Karma always has its way, and
soon the sun began to set and it got dark.
Mr. Fox realized that he was lost and there was no way that he would get
home in time for dinner. He stopped and
yelled out for anyone to give him directions.
He encountered a squirrel and she said “Yeah, I know where you live, I
was watching you this morning from the treetops, but I am not going to help you
because I don’t like how you treated my friend the brave little mouse!”
Mr. Fox was unfazed at this… he didn’t need a squirrel’s
help anyways! He continued on…
…but he soon realized he was walking in circles.
Mr. Fox heard a rustling in the bushes. He was afraid, but he would never admit
it. “Who is there?” said Mr. Fox.
Mrs. Raccoon popped out of the bushes, and Mr. Fox was
secretly relieved. He turned to her and
said “Mrs. Raccoon, I have been lost for several hours and I am very hungry, is
there any way you would spare some leftovers for me? Mrs. Raccoon was not amused; “You made my
three young children cry today with your antics! Get away from my home!”. Mr. Fox was slightly saddened by this, but he
continued on.
Finally, after wandering for several more hours, Mr. Fox
found his home. He was so tired he just
wanted to sleep, but when he walked to his front door, there was the brave
little mouse.
Brave little mouse said “Mr. Fox, you owe me and my friends
an apology, and I want one before the sun comes up!”. Mr. Fox responded, “you silly little mouse,
get out of my way, I am tired and you can’t do anything to make me apologize or
stop me from eating dinner and going to bed!”
Suddenly, all of the bushes around Mr. Fox began to
rustle. All of the forest creatures
began to appear… opossums, squirrels, mice… and wolves and bears. They were not amused by the antics of Mr.
Fox.
Mr. Fox began to apologize profusely, and he was so afraid
that he began to cry.
You would think that the forest animals made fun of him, but
they didn’t.
They knew that the most important thing in life is to be
nice to people, so they let Mr. Fox go home.
Shortly after, he felt so bad that he apologized to each animal separately and
gave them all gifts. He stopped causing mischief
and to this day, he is friends with little brave mouse, because sometimes
bravery comes from the most unexpected places.
Author's Note: This story was inspired as a rewrite of Aesop's Tale "The Fox and the Mask". In this story, the fox goes to the theater and encounters a scary mask, to whom he comments about being lovely, but not having any real brains, and then he is no longer afraid.
The original Fable was very short, so I added a lot of new content, and based my writing off of the characteristics of the fox. He thought he was tough, but he still has to learn lessons in life.
Bibliography: "The Fox and the Mask" from The Fables of Aesop Aesop's Fables
Great story! I really liked your twist on the tale but you also kept the same moral meaning behind it which was nice! I also agree that it is important to be nice to everyone in your lifetime. I do believe in karma, for the most part. It always seems to bite you in the butt when you least expect it.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great little tale. I think the original story was that even though the mask the fox stumbled upon was beautiful and well-crafted, it was empty and had nothing to offer other than beauty. I think the original moral was that outside value was nothing compared to inner worth. I love that you took the story and spun a new moral out of it which taught about the importance of being true and kind to all beings.
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